noninjaes

My turn to exchange the favour! Here's a list of suggestions to help the last few poems for buddy up. I call this my thinking box the colour of anticipation ...

22. almost shrill notes rise from the throat - a distinction only made to prove a point otherwise ignored and there is no significance here your notes rise too high ...

21. water & soul

20. taxes nothing (good) rhymes with taxes not in the way i'd like it to like faxes and lapses anxiety to boot - been worried sick about the papers been ...

19. Sights Along The Hawkesbury #2 rain upon a rosy sky and the sun sets somewhere in the storm cloud and silver but the rest is left to burn orange ...

18. grey matter thoughts mould together like putty between fingers and the tack tack of the way it clings - it splits apart merges together inconceivable unrecognisable a mess.

17. matchbox dreams i sold my soul for a set of keys - a silver lining open top convertible and boot space for one. it was just enough to get ...

16. running on empty passion fuelled by pain is like curing sleep with caffeine - the results run fast and thin and then there is only emptiness

15. object (im)permanence

14. Habits

13. keeping my composure (the aftermath) I've got disbelieving chlorine eyes a leaden heart put up for size two shaking hands to clutch my heart a very broken missing part ...

12. i learnt the words and frankly they're shit let a sad song play along to the chilly winters air and know that i love you more than i used ...

11. escalation this time it could be the last time and yet my goodbye was soft - my touch fleeting and i didn't tell you i love you more than ...

Use Protection Kiddos Of liquid heat and icy stone. In boiling blood and freezing bones. But rise the day and fall the night to walls of heat and seeping ice. ...

I really like the rhythm and flow of that poem. ^ It has a particularly nice cadence to it that makes everything fit together so wonderfully.