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Re: The tragedy of Natalie
The story is unique but it has a few grammar errors here and there especially in the sentence structure. I feel like it would be better if you said 'eating ...
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Re: The Eldritch Convenience Store Employee Chapter 1: The Actor's Fall
Your story is nice but it feels rushed. The events are happening too fast without explanation to a point that it does not make sense. An example is how you ...
Feb 29, 2024