nilou-and-amani

I think that there are two types of prostitutes. The ones who get abused into prostitution are the victims, because they didn't make the decision themselves, they were forced into ...

I really love how you catch the audience's attention in the beginning. The descriptions in the first couple of paragraphs were perfect- right amount, right tone right everything. But after ...

I really love this! It's beautiful. It flows really well, and i like how you convey your emotions so clearly and that there's still something behind it. It's a little ...

The emotion you were trying to convey is pretty clear in the drawing. So good job on that. The drawing itself is good, you just need to fix you shading. ...

It's beautiful, and i love the meaning. Repition is good, but i think there is too much Repition in your poem. You can try using "May I have this dance?" ...

It's confusing, but it made me think. It's pretty good.

hey everyone! how r u ?! well my names nilou (short for niloufar).i'm iranian and i live in dubai. i just joined and i just wanted 2 say hi.

It fell off and rolled towards the young man’s foot. As it gently tapped his foot, he bent down and picked it up. She had pulled out the doorknob in ...