nilou-and-amani

I loved it! It's extremely interessting! Aaron reminds me of this guy i know. Stubborn, careless and tries to be insensitive when he's really soft and mushy inside! It was ...

First of all, you backyard is beautiful! The 4th one is my favourite! I love the color of the leaf and the water that's on it. It's very refreshing. It's ...

I personally think that to a certain extent it's a virtue. But, if your pride gets in the way of your relationships with others, then it is a fault.

Thank you guys for your comments. Truth be told, i wasn't even trying to be creative when i took it. I was actually really young, iwas about 11. I just ...

She sat at the table alone, her only companions the bright blue bowl of Special K cereal and her deep thoughts. Her thoughts usually revolved around her work life: her ...

I love it. There's something warm about it and your color coordination was terrific i love how you chose simpile colors that complemented each other so well. I like that ...

It was sooo good. You made a couple of minor mistakes, so just read over it carefully. I didn't really understand that part about the skinny locker. I also love ...

It wasn't outstanding but it was pretty good. You made good points and you suppoted them, so good job. You made some punctuation mistakes and somwehre in the middle of ...

It was absolutely beautiful!! You conveyed the eomtions very strongly. There were only a few minor mistakes, other than that i love it! I just absolutely love it! I love ...

At first, i didn't understand your poem, but then it mad sense when i read the top part. Your ideas are good, but you didn't convey them strongly. Read it ...

Overall it's pretty interesting and fun to read. You have some grammar mistakes and your language tends to become immature in some places. I suggest you read over it a ...

Niagara falls!! It was beautiful!

This is really goo. I love love the way you use imagery to convey your feelings. I think that you can make it more dramatic by adding a few commas ...

I love this picture! I took it about 4 years ago. I used to take care of these three stray cats, and this the youngest one.

I definetly think that internet pornograhy should be banned, because anyone of any age can have access to it. the "proceed only if you are above 18" sign doesn't really ...