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Re: Broken Bones
I love the creativity and rhyme scheme in your poem it's similar to you heart poem I like how you compared your heart to broken bones and also I loved ...
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Re: My crazy poetry
dreamers of the dead world come forth to meet me die along my path come forth come forth come to kill me battle each other with stories and tears come ...
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Re: Dreams of Suicide
I like how you made yourself seem so vulnerable. Did you really have a dream about suicide? I like how to gave the wind personification you made the poem sound ...
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Re: Do You Know Fear?
wonderfully written very nice I really loved it :) I won't annoy you about grammar so don't worry LOL I like the way you started off the poem by saying ...
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Re: My Skin
I really love this is expresses so much emotion and panic I really liked it when the guy was the only one able to take off her layers of skin ...
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Re: broken heart
i have another work i don't think you saw it
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Re: Look inside of me
I think this is how most people feel they want people to see the amazing tragic stories with in themselves and they want the person the show it to, to ...
Sep 16, 2008 -
Re: broken heart
I gave you my heart and you broke it, millions of shattered pieces with dying blood, Then you threw it back at me but all I said was "keep it ...
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Re: Falling Dreams
I think this poem flows really well and has a very relaxing quality to it very nice work :)
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Re: Welcome New Members!
Hi I just joined what's up?
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Re: Artist on strings
You call me an artist BUT WHAT IF I LIKE TO WRITE? you call me a karate kid BUT WHAT IF I PASS UP A FIGHT? AM I ONLY A ...
Sep 16, 2008
