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its okay ... as said before don't put it up here if you don't want it looked at!!! :D but it was good and i have had some of the ...

There wasn't any punctuation. There was so rhmye but not enough to keep a scheme. Otherwise I feel bad for him, but its not exactly clear why she didn't like ...

watch your spelling and grammar but for the most part it was pretty good :elephant:

no i hadn't planned to b/c threw the chapters i will go very in depth w/ the personialitys and other characters...... i plan on it being very exciting and plot ...

Masquerade Kendall Turner sat in front of her bureau and studied herself. She looked gorgeous, she had waited for this dance for the past three years. The dance where Coty ...

*tear* :cry:

i liked it . but I'm not quite sure if the was suppose to be a rhyme scheme . otherwise i think it was great! :elephant: keep rockin!!

Hey!! Thats where i found out about this to!! Im new too so dont worry.... IM me anytime!! :D

Sorry for the mistake I made earlier! I have it all written down in a notebook copied the wrong title , I re-wrote what I had onto here. :)

The Turner family lived on top Cravesville Hill in the small town of Drune. They moved from Romania 80 years ago , after Kendall's parents passed on. She now lives ...

I get very easliy confused and in the middle of the song I was lost. By the end it all made sense. So now that I'm at the and it ...

I like alot of your stuff, and this just topped it all off!!! AWESOME! The only thing I have to say is make it longer so I can read more ...

Okay I sing for school,competions, etc. (yes I have won and my groups I'm in normally win to! :) ) Is the beat supposed to go fast? I sang here ...

S.O.S She giggles and smiles, He talks to her so sweetly If only he knew her secret. She loves him, Everthing about him . His shaggy,messy brown mop of hair, ...

depressing bit much? i just hope that not how you really feel that was pretty strong! :shock: