nightmarebook13

i wasnt trying to be honest. its not only about me but im a leader or a gsa at my school so its something thats important to me. thank you ...

its actually up to tthe reader interpertation, but it was about a girl and her sexuality. something that one of my friends is struggling with very badly and i just ...

sorry this was quickly typed. no caps...mb, just want to see comments on the style she woke up on her birthday and looked in the mirror, realizing something she never ...

Thank you very much! The reviews helped out alot and I wrote this one about a year ago, and just wanted to throw it up for grabs to see if ...

Through it all. Through all the pain, We had so much to gain. All of the doleful days, And those words you made my heart say. I love you. I ...

Hey, I really liked the image of the person you were going for. You "painted" the picture very well. As previously stated, watch the capitalization. I'm going to suggest the ...

Do you have somewhere you draw inspiration from or is this something your writing from a personal emotion? I agree very much with the previous comment that this comes off ...

tell me your in a band. because i want to hear this recorded.

ahola! the vague-ness allows you to apply it to your own life. --- but i want to know what happend to her to make her feel this way or is ...

meant to be sang slower and pick up around chorus... with something like michelle branch guitars. :) shes looks outside her window, hoping to the sun again. but the closest ...

ahola! unlike the others i think i saw the line pattern... on not so much patter but as a dramatic shape to take a breath sort of as to like ...

ahola! okay, first let me say this. i liked it. but i agree with above statements in the fact that it is tending to be a little vague. which is ...

okay.... hmmm.... very impressive. little dark but thats how i like it. perhaps draw inspriation from some music would help make it longer and more in depth. i want to ...

Like you said at the beginning , it was very repetitive. I don't quite understand what was happening. I mean, was the "baby" being restless , not sleeping, and, crying. ...

Watch the grammar and rhyming. Needs work, but I think that if you worked a little more on the screaming part you might have a head-liner on Taste of Chaos. ...