nichole_kram

Thanks for your comments! I am still new at this though, so do you know how to re-post it? Do I have to make a new post or can I ...

Thanks for the review. I really respect and understand what you say here. I will work on it a little more, and see what I can do with it. I'm ...

Hey! I'm a real big supporter of animal rights too. So I tried checking out your website and the Internet told me it couldn't find the site I was looking ...

Wow. That was a very depressing story! I agree with most of the people on here, the format of your writing is a little hard to understand, it kind of ...

There was a knock on the Office door. “It’s open!” Officer Dean yelled. “Carter and Bob, I want you to come in here!” He barked… Silence. “Carter? Bob? Do you ...

Lol, I started reading it, but it is 11 O'clock at night, so I'm tired! I'm printing it out, so that I could read it while I'm in bed. But ...

Oh.. my.. God. I loved it! So far, that is the best one I have read. I was so interested in it, that when my computer dinged to tell me ...

“Not a clue sir.” Private detective Morris Core answered. “I want this man figured out! A.S.A.P! What are you all standing around for? I said move it!” Officer Jon Dean ...

That is definitely original! That is good. I disagree with spaced_out. I could not imagine Barney telling that story. Not at all. There was some parts in the story of ...

That was pretty good. There was one mistake that caught my eye though, just to tell you. Where you said " and by then they were all to intoxicated to ...

That was an incredible story! :D I loved how it grabbed my attenchion right away. There were a few punctuation errors I saw, but other than that, I loved it! ...