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Thanks guys! And oh yeah, the perfection thing is 'under construction' because I changed him and forgot the follow up sentences... it was late! But ahk now I have so ...

Aw Ash.. it's were , with us being all writers and such... Aw thanks! This ^ is all brilliant! When I do more crtis I'll donate more... I'm falling behind ...

You bring up good points, ChernobyllyInclined, but this is under constant work on about 3 different forums I'm on... So the end result is going to be major different. This ...

Thanks Angel! I was going to go more on the helpless lover, angry wife, etc, but then, knowing me, I'd make it not the PG rating it had to be. ...

^^ You all have 100 points more now!

Okay i am just going to be a total twit here and edit my own writing HA. Stones, with their cracked surfaces from the freezing temperatures, were aligned in a ...

In progress, i felt like giving you my opinion on it! Haha. But it is so late here, must sleep! Oh and good tactic with the cliches, I reckon it ...

Oh yes, is there more? Ha where's the romance? I cannot wait for the next bit, please pm me when the next bit is up, or i'll keep an eye ...

WOW that is long. Um... how about i do half now and half later? Oh my haha. I'll do it though, i love fantasy.

Oh my Clo THANKYOU! That was great! Oh and thanks too Macs! Yess i do like that sentence too... and i will definitely fix up the things you all picked ...

Okay reviewing now but telling people you haven't edited turns people off... and you should've edited before posting, though so far i can't find anything major. Give me until tomorrow

Ah thankyou (lol 1.07am! Had to stay awake long enough to get this haha you're such a good reviewer!) My hero ashleylee. I have this submitted in another forum as ...

Okay i am sorry the vampism doesn't actually come out till next chapter gah. But i am physically unable to tell a short story which translates into I cannot make ...

bahaha it's actually really good. I think so. But uh - you might also want to add more onto the introducing of the music 'end part' and all that interaction. ...

wow thanks guys! i finally got through ALL the versions. You guys rock :) And yeah Bryn was cliche, my bad! I had to have a hot blonde guy in ...