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fine but i really don't want to go there because not as many people go there.

wow sounds fun! but i refuse to wake up at 7am tomorrow morning because that'll be 10pm American Time. Oh well. Have fun!

Ohh i love casting people for characters. The men on google are simply divine... *insert evil laugh* New faces are great thankyou for that!!

31,500 Eep That's it for one week. Damn stupid exams. Oh well if i fail year 11 i can blame NaNo! hooray for an excuse this time... >_

Has gone under major reconstruction and i have actually only kept the characters (have altered them entirely to be non-gold-eyed and non-perfect-in-every-way) and story line. The end result of them ...

I loved it ... the next parts are amazing too! Okay one thing - the bra and undies thing felt so pedophilia to me - but that's only because i ...

I decided I'd edit it again.. for some reason i did not realise i've already done it. So here's a better crit. It is a bit slow. Nothing MAJOR happens ...

i like where this is going, and i'm intrigued to where it does go. But you're showing rather than telling. It's all very story-like and not 'in the moment' as ...

Considering it's the middle of March... “I’m getting married!” “To Ambroise?” “Who else?” “Really?” “Really.” “Wow!” “Wow!” “When?” “We’re not sure – January so

Maybe because men are lazy? Just deal with it why don't you?

As usual she was bouncing up and down on the balls of her feet, the shine radiating off her long, tanned legs, almost blinding me. Bit boring.

28,805 And now back to exam revision...

What are your editing tips? I mean not just personal but your selection of 'loved ones' to critique? RULE ONE Giving to boyfriend only destroys relationships. usually. Has great potential. ...

First story/novel: First novel was called Eagle Eyed Cherry Lipstick. About a boy who randomly transforms into an Eagle when he gets horny XD which complicates things when he gets ...

For NaNo i'm doing this one about a magical horse who can hear the girls thoughts and feelings and responds. The girl is paralyzed but through the horse and the ...