niccy_v

I only joined to get people to read my writing and critique it. And likewise to read others' work and learn from them. So far I'm twice as good since ...

And in my PM what did i tell you - i would find it. Gosh so sorry to bother you nate :( OMG YES! Definitely going to put mine in. ...

Hm sounds good. I would read :) most certainly. But do try and write it. And when/if you finish, and hate it, go back, edit hard, change this and that, ...

Oh and one thing: you sort of need to develop the NON VEGGIE vampire a little more. There isn't actually anything to suggest she isn't - not really. Now maybe ...

Right. Okay. Too/To. Now seriously lol... to do something: to too much of something: too switch too should be switch to. lol i am vicious :twisted: POV: First person narrative ...

I can't say there is anything to actually correct. It was amazing. fat lot of help i am *slaps self* but that was brilliant. Nitpicks: computer No need for italics. ...

Righto. I am slightly perplexed by this. While it was good on the ground level, it was to be brutally honest - plain boring. And while i know there are ...

Okay: It's quite good. I enjoyed it. But: -her reaction is a little stiff. I'd expect a whole lot more to be going on in her head (try and italics ...

While there is nothing wrong with it... - Why is the boy so mature? If it wasn't for you saying kindergarten i would've assumed someone older. Acrylic? For example. When ...

Here, as requested by you. Sorry it took so damn long. Warning : Involves one hell of a lot of comments. I've grown tired of breaking up the writing with ...

Ah, Cold and Broken, did you use paint shop pro? Hehehe i have way too much fun with psp in the making of my covers. It does things to my ...

Oh i learnt at 2am in the morning, while full of enough sugar, my characters do crazy things that somehow fit in perfectly 6am is a perfectly normal time to ...

Oh yes i meant prime minister, just used to American speak it's infecting me! Argh! OHH i have killed off my character with a J... after a very brutal vamp ...

Righto i shall begin by reminding any poor souls who diverted their attention to 'Sunburnt Thirst' my NaNo horror. I did finish it at 90 something thousand words but it's ...

Pringles (cheese and onion) Or Coles SNowdrops (marshmellows in choc covered with coconut) YUMM I think (considering snow drops are 2 bags of 6 for $3) i consumed $30 of ...