nicchaos

Very creative Riveneye. I don't think you have shown me this one yet. I like the connection with the moon, sun and stars. The only thing I have against it ...

Very powerful image created here, as well as some powerful emotions. Not to mention a lot of people can relate to this story. Overall, well done.

There is a war that has no beginning and, as long as long as human life continues, no end. It is held in a place specially made for it, for ...

Yes I am a merchant, selling great things but one ware is only suited for kings. Yes, I have something here with me that is the last thing you'd want ...

Hey! I want to thank you for reviewing my poem earlier. I have just posted another one called the dawn perspective. It has gotten good praise so far but not ...

Year: 15 Entry log: 741-395 The fight is still raging, and I still still sit on the sidelines observing. The light and the darkness continue to try and destroy each ...

Alright alright. I give. The I's are capitalized. I admit, it does look better that way. To reader 22, no i don't thing its completely obvious. I am sad to ...

wow you have a lot of people to review. i heard that poetry isn't your thing, but i want more reviews on my two poems, "my calm" and "who I ...

Yay! I love people telling me something is wrong. People really do care. :) To ruberduck, thanks for pointing that out. I will change it right away. And because you ...

I wrote this when I was trying to define myself. Some parts are cryptic and may only make sense to me, I"m good with that. The part at the end ...

I'm a creator of things, yet a gear being worn down. I do not desire for things with my mind, yet hope for things with my heart. I exceed in ...

I don't know, capitalizing the I's is technically incorrect, but i did not want to draw attenchen to the fact that I repeated "I" so many times. And I was ...

Ha Ha. :) She texted me right when i got home and asked about that. Regarding the poem, it was just something that was in my head that i wiped ...

I do not yet know you We may have spent a thousand hours together, but I do not yet know you. I may have looked upon you my whole life, ...