nicchaos

Hi I would really like more people to look at my work. Taking the time to rewiew it would be a huge help. Thank you. P.S. if you could, I ...

I came here to this place with many others. They are existed; I can see it on their faces. We are grouped together, sheep in a pen wanting to be ...

All around me they are, those who want nothing more they have everything they desire and more. They have girls they have money they have fast cars and muscle and ...

Why do we love each other? I have not, perhaps cannot love, but I will tell you what I know. The reason we love is because, as humans, we are ...

I have found it, I have seen it. Most lethal drug, kill me slowly. It found me weak, victim of chance. Won’t stand a chance delicious form. It gets near ...

Dear sir or madam, the reason for this letter is to ask why you hate me. Don’t get all protective, it’s alright if you do. I hate myself as well, ...

I'm having some problems with a certain host of Angels. They tease the mortals of earth, flying over them, blowing them kisses. Sometimes they pick them up, taking them to ...

You all know well the sun the great giver of day. Children play and flowers bloom under its warming ray. It gives us heat, it gives us light it's all ...

Before you start panicking that you don’t have anything to review, look at mine. I really want feedback on my work but no one tells me anything! Anything you say ...

Im so sorry. I forgot to put it in. Here it is

Hey I'm glad to see someone is so eager to rewiew. I have had a poem called "Anchor or take flight" for a while now, and no one had posted ...

All the morals I have constructed, with careful guidance and support, are in jeopardy of crumbling under the weight of questions. If my morals are so correct, as everyone has ...

It's very boring here,there is nothing to do in this factory of joy, the factory for you. I sit here in this desk to take any request for a shipment ...

Wow. That was deep. I was almost crying at the end. the vocabulary is so powerful and meaningful. your going to touch a lot of people with something like this.

I like the unorthodox use of adjectives. That is a fantastic way to get colorful words across. Also it was cool at the end to hear how they came together ...