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I really like this too, it's cool how you managed to make it rhyme, yet still keep the momentum of the poem. You also capture what silence is like: silence ...

i actually really like this! i like the whole point behind it, what you said before the song itself. :) The chorus i thought was really nice, and, correct me ...

this was really good and descriptive! Maybe a little over the top for my taste, however if you like it like that then keep it. i like that you used ...

How am i supposed to breathe, If i'm swimming through waves? How is it possible to see, If sight is a blurry haze? How am i supposed to cry, If ...

well, i have never seen those Halloween Uncut or the other one, so i have no idea what you're talking about... :D Did you write this or was it from ...

Oh my gosh, i would so read this! It's not something i'd usually pick but i loved it! I like the bit where you mentioned that she introduced her manager ...

wow, i loved this! :D I think the story line is good, but i think you should explain how Karma knows where her father lives, i dont think you mentioned ...

i like the whole idea for this story. i'm guessing the girl, Honey, is hallucinating before she dies, i think this idea is really good. But is she underwater? It's ...

i'm not sure what this is about? is it a recipe? i like the last line though!! you have a good sense of humour! :D

These are really thoughtful! in the second poem, i love the line 'lifting her malaria curse', it's really creative. i hope your friend Rob is better now, if not, i ...

Breathing heavily mum dumped the food onto the floor. She motioned for us to begin eating. I plodded over and lay down. The meal was nice and fresh, it tore ...