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Re: Phantasm:Chapter One (Part Two)
Also, right, she wasn't even emotional about the entire affair, 'cause Rose already dumped Ken without Charles knowing it...will be affirmed on the next chapters... Just thanks, I guess I'll ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Phantasm:Chapter One (Part Two)
Also, right, she wasn't even emotional about the entire affair, 'cause Rose already dumped Ken without Charles knowing it...will be affirmed on the next chapters... Just thanks, I guess I'll ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Phantasm:Chapter One (Part Two)
Additional, the words I used, which were difficult for you, were the words I learned as I read Stephenie Mayer's books and that of J.K. Rowling's. Actually, upon encountering those ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Phantasm:Chapter One (Part Two)
Hippie! Thanks for the critique... Here are some clarifications and some things you needed to consider - I hope...hehe.. For all of you reading this part, please, do also read ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Phantasm:Prologue and Chapter one (Part one)
WHOA! Finally! Thanks Ashleigh Brown for the very nice compliment! I felt very inspired to continue my story! Also, thanks to Mars for the awesome review - I followed it! ...
May 16, 2009
