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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: What I want

    Good Day! I definitely liked what you have written. I just wanted to critique a little and give some pointers... My hips started to sway with the beat. Don't have ...

    May 4, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Twenty

    This is my entry for the twisted love writing contest. I was really timeless. I hope you'll like it. It is my first prose. :D I'll be transforming this into ...

    May 1, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Poem

    I can clearly picture out your work- the scenes and occurrences. What I have to critique is the manner your poem flows. Though some parts did sound a poem, others ...

    Apr 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: "I am"

    I salute the way you write- comprehensible and masterminded. Yet, it would be better appreciated if a little rhythmic pattern and meter was observed. And since you started placing a ...

    Apr 29, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You, my Everything!

    When refulgence was stolen, to obscure somber I've fallen, 'till came dazzle from my sweet delights- 'You are my light!' When I am up a blind alley, roads to walk ...

    Apr 28, 2009


I am proud of my self, the reason why some of you might disagree with me a little with, but nevertheless I still proud.
— Oxara