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Re: What I want
Good Day! I definitely liked what you have written. I just wanted to critique a little and give some pointers... My hips started to sway with the beat. Don't have ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Twenty
This is my entry for the twisted love writing contest. I was really timeless. I hope you'll like it. It is my first prose. :D I'll be transforming this into ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Poem
I can clearly picture out your work- the scenes and occurrences. What I have to critique is the manner your poem flows. Though some parts did sound a poem, others ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: "I am"
I salute the way you write- comprehensible and masterminded. Yet, it would be better appreciated if a little rhythmic pattern and meter was observed. And since you started placing a ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: You, my Everything!
When refulgence was stolen, to obscure somber I've fallen, 'till came dazzle from my sweet delights- 'You are my light!' When I am up a blind alley, roads to walk ...
Apr 28, 2009
