neonwriter

What is this song singling in on? I mean is it about love or like a guy just wants a girl? But anyway I definitely would show this to your ...

This is a very fitting poem for the season and I could just see a cold, crisp park in the late afternoon sun :) I really want to see you ...

Oh my god! This was phenomenal and written so vibrantly written I thought she was telling it to me.I'm assuming that he cheated and or left her and so these ...

This was a good story just, no paragraphs after a character spoke. It drove my eyes crazy to see that much writing crammed into one paragraph. Now I don't know ...

GRAMMAR NAZI ALERT! this poem drove me crazy with just 1 simple mistake "When they didn't DONUT quick enough" WOAHH! PROOF READ THE WORK! Also "faster! Faster!" Why isn't the ...

I loved this poem! But you could've made it longer and more in depth. What did he do to hurt you? And dont do the parenthesis around like (truth) put ...

I'm really enjoying your work! Also I'm glad your enjoying mine ;) I've been reading this saga for awhile now and I'm really wrapped up in it. My favorite character ...

I enjoyed this but I'm gonna let another user go over spelling mistakes cause' I don't like doing it (lol not lazy just dont wanna be mean) Also some parts ...

awww! you should submit this into someone or like a magazine! I love this and it's so heart touching. Man this is a tear jerker also is this about child ...

This was a really good story and since I'm a fellow fantasy writer and this an amazing story. I realize how hard it can be to write one of these ...

wow this is just wow... This is very very very weird and almost eerie. I liked the ending and is this a short story or poetry? This is my first ...

I loved this work and the second one too. It was amazing and I really liked your character dan! He was exactly as you described him and I'm very glad ...

Okay so I'm not into picking out all your mistakes but I want to say this: It's a very confusing story. They stay in Paris but you jumped around a ...

First off this is the first time I have read your work and I wasn't expecting a vampire short story to go so in depth. I really liked this and ...

Wow! This is an amazing end to an amazing series. I could feel that you did put alot of time into these pieces and I really admire you for that. ...