neonshorty

I wrote this about five minutes ago so it probably isn't too good... Is that what you wish to be? Just another face in the crowd A vivid memory erased ...

Hahaha good idea :wink:

The overall plot is great. I really love the paragraphs in italics. You need to make the non-italic stuff as descriptive as the italic stuff...if that made any sense But ...

I have 10 on msn and....*deep breath* 239 on aim

I redid the paragraphs...I hope it works

I love fantasy, but I also love the books where every little thing that happens happens for a reason. Do you follow?

Thanx guys. And someone visit Darkmoon158's Blog please! lol

In the depth of midnight When the darkness swallows the moon A bird soars above, he is called The Raven His feathers shine with a green tint His claws sharper ...

WoW! That is a really good poem. It leaves you thinking. But does every break up end in a note?? Most I've seen have. Again I say very good poem.

Hey Darkmoon158 (I didn't know if you wanted your real name flying around the internet) Texas is soooooooooo way better!!! My state only has rednecks out in the west. haha!

Yea I've lived in the same town in Texas for forever.

I know! Our mall is pretty cool...Your mall sounds cool too. Texas is the best state ever!

I live near Houston in The Woodlands.

Hello! My name is Sarah and I live in Texas. I am not a cowgirl (contrary to popular belief)...I don't even own a horse. I'm 13 years old and in ...

Hey I'm new here..well I mean I have been here for a few days. But I just found this! My name is Sarah...i guess thats what you can call me.