neonshorty

I really liked that story. It has some things that I can relate to and some I can't at all. I think it would be fine just by itself or ...

I thought that was a great story. It could have so many different meanings. I enjoyed it!

A beautiful poem! I really enjoyed reading it.

Overall it was awesome! I really enjoyed it, but towards the end the poem lost its rhythm and fell apart. Maybe you should keep the same length phrases throughout the ...

Definatly Squirrels! Rain or Sun?

Let me love you- Mario I'm such a nerd...

Here are a couple of websites I use for names of creatures. I also like to use foreign languages in my names.

I thinks it a good start to a story, but I don't see exactly where you are going. Maybe it is hazy for a reason, it isnt a bad thing. ...

Awesome poem! Like everyone else I loved the first two lines

Longest-0 Shortest-0 Hahaha.... guys are my friends for a while then when we get close to going out they begin to hate me or get tired of me... who knows ...

FRIENDS! ! ! ! you can never have enough... I'm already your friend darkmoon, But i can be your friend again!

I hate oceans...they are sooooooooo big and just there, I guess it might be the thought of dying slowly, but thats just my demented mind. I also can't eat if ...

Ok...this post is for the third and fourth chapters. I really like the way you describe certain things like how Valerie's room looks and that sort of thing. But other ...

Well...I couldn't think of a metaphor for something sharp so that line was kind of as a last resort. And I think I get what you are saying about the ...

wow...that was amazing. I can picture everything in my head. Really great!