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Hey! Did you know that the rule is that you have to critique someone else's work twice before you post anything yourself? It's better that way- so you can get ...

Hey!!! Welcome to YWS! I totally agree with Casey-kent...it's AWESOME. And addicting, so watch out. :) PM me if you have any questions! I'm new here, too...been here about a ...

This is really good! Maybe add more description to it to make it more compelling. :) I've got some things to critique on, grammar-wise... They've all gathered to see my ...

HEY SPIKER!!! :P Nice, this is AWESOME! :) Besides spelling "knees" "kness", which I know was just a typo, there's nothiing else that I see needs changing. Are you gonna ...

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INTERNET!!!! Mostly email. And most recently, surfing YWS. Like right now, I really should be doing homework. But I'm not. I'm replying to this. XD Nah, it's email and YWS ...

Awesome job! I love the description used throughout the piece. The beginning really drew me in to the story and reading it left me wanting more. I love it! :D ...

X??? Give me a break. :) New topic! Food: Pizza

Hey! Yup, I'm new...I started a new topic thinking I was replying to this topic. XP Oh, well. Now I know! :D Haha, Ashlyn (look above!), I got an account! ...

I LOVE FICTION!!!!!!!!!!!! That's my favorite kind of writing AND reading. No special type of fiction...just fiction in general.

Hey! I'm new here- I found out about this awesome site through a friend, good ol' Ashes, towards the top (zoeybird13024). We like writing fiction stories...yeah, and Ashlyn, AWESOME JOB ...