nayex

fill your eyes with open sky. i’ve looked at these stars a million times, but never with you. these same lights that might have flickered into darkness years and years ...

i liked your poem very much, the only think i didn't like was how you separated your lines. it was a bit confusing and takes the illusion away. Of course ...

See how I move So rigid and crooked. These hands you once held with Have lost their gentleness Outside this mind This figure looks just the same Pieces of puzzles ...

Snoink : Thank you very much for reading, i did play with the lines a bit, and i have horrible spelling/grammar. Navita : Yo creo lo que es espanol y ...

The stars, the moon they have all been blown out, You left me in the dark. And as I sit on this cold bench, I wonder when you’ll come back. ...