nayex

Your a good writer, i can see that, but for some reason the whole idea didn't really interest me, but that's just me, not you. my favorite part was though ...

hola yo hablo muy bien el espanol, pero soy malisima en escribiendo ^^ I liked your poem very much, its very charming and well written. i caught myself smiling at ...

I really like this, the whole idea of it. Sometimes it became to wordy, but your imagery is quite wonderful. I let my fingers, like carnivorous spiders, come to know ...

i like it, its really simple, but it makes its point, the beginning has a good flow i'm not too fond of this though. Please go on without me, I ...

Hello, my name is Kim-e. I’m very tiny, and very fragile. I’m petite with small feet and small hands. I have smaller fingers and smaller toes. I have big sad ...

again my grammar is a issue in my writing. Also to be honest, i really dont care for my reader, i care about writing in ways that luckily my reader ...

my grammar is awful, spelling, punctuation, all that stuff. i needa work on it, but thank you for the advice and suggestions.

i could really connect with this poem, and as i was reading it the more i was drawn into it. It's more of a song then a poem, but nonetheless ...

Welcome! ^.^ so your first post? lemme try to help you. I fell in his arms, He smiles, My heart pounds, The smell of love was in the air, Was ...

Those features you carry That always persuade me to kiss you. Brown eyes that never tempted me before I hoped to watch my every move. Your lips that cut in ...

i really feel the emotion, as for review I'm not good with punctuation, but i can say i really enjoyed this line And so does my soul, it becomes bruised ...

Welcome! ^.^ i like how you started your poem, but the rhyming of it was annoying, too childish maybe? i never like anything that repeats either >< but that's just ...

what first got me to read this was your title, no offense but i was let down. you could do a lot better.

I loveee thiss! And it was a unique idea, very much enjoyed your work.

Over the years I've counted, my loses and I've lost my will. started off nicely. I refuse to fight over something that's right, so I just leave my suffering with ...