naturesgirl

To lilmisswritergirl: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And I appreciate your words :wink: I probably will continue this later on!

To Merry_Haven: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. And i've gathered most of my knowledge about regency from Jane Austen's works, and so my writing reflects her style ...

To NixonBlitzen: Thank you! I appreciate the nitpicking! :wink: It helps me improve my writing! We each were mourned in our own separate ways. This sentence doesn't make sense gramatically. ...

To Lost_In_Dreamland: Thank you! And I do agree with you about the conclusion. I wrote this entire piece in one sitting (because of my procrastination, and this being an assignment) ...

To Lost_In_Dreamland: Thank you! I appreciate all the corrections and criticisms! I do suffer with some grammar and usage :D It helps to be corrected! And really, thank you. I ...

Angel of Death, thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it! I really don't like writing unfortunate endings, but we were covering Anti-Transcendentalism, and I felt a pessimistic ending ...

Author's Note: Apologies for the length of this piece! But I found that i really can't shorten it! Please, again, critique. It is much needed and much appreciated. Miss Adrianna ...

Author's Note: I have divided this story into two posts, because of its length. I never really intended it to be so long! Anyways, this is only the first half. ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this piece; I loved your description of Uncle Gerald. However, I noticed a lot of mistakes in punctuation and grammar. I assume you used fragments as ...

I really enjoyed this. I assume there's more coming? I really can't critique you on anything; and I would honestly feel bad for doing so since I'm new to this ...

Note: I wrote this piece for the contest held back in November. We were to write a personal essay, in any form we pleased, about an experience that had a ...

Thank you! And ya... its not perfect lol. I believe i did this one almost a year ago! Neways, I love working with graphite and pastels *not together, though I've ...

This is great. I love the choppy, short sentences. Its a wonderful style tool. :) The introduction is very nice. I think you may have some grammar and spelling errors, ...

Thank you everyone! I'm glad you like them :D And I appreciate the crits :wink:

Lol yep. I don't know why i decided to leave out the shading of the girl's face. I was in such a hurry when I drew this, trying to get ...