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Re: How many pages should a chapter be?
I've wondered about this in the past, and did a bit of research online, and observed approximate counts from books I've read. A typical chapter may be from 4,000-6,000 words, ...
Mar 4, 2013 -
Re: Illustrated Fiction- Your opinions
Thanks so much for your input guys! I hope people keep posting! I will be posting an illustration with my next chapter for one of my novels "The Girl with ...
Jan 9, 2013 -
Re: Illustrated Fiction- Your opinions
As both a visual artist and a writer, I always thoroughly enjoy reading an illustrated novel (and I don't mean graphic novels, although those are great too), and yet wonder ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: Let Thy Punishment Fit Thy Crime
Author's note: This is just a quick something I wrote for my ENGL 105 final project. It's not necessarily high quality, because I wrote it in two and a half ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore
Haha!!! This is absolute LOVE! I love the bold-face and enlarged font you used in the letter. "AND THEN". That really made me laugh. Great job, I really have nothing ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: A Speculative Fiction part II
Very nice! The first post really caught my attention. I admit, I was pretty confused after reading it, but this part cleared it up for me. I really like how ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Warmed Over
Wow. Amazing job!! You said this was inspired by a dream? A nightmare more likely! But absolutely brilliant. I really love how descriptive you got about Suzanne and her son, ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: Wonder Bread
Really great job! You provide such wonderful imagery in this piece, it feels like i'm there in the story. I think my favorite part of this work, was probably the ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: The Sound of Music- Angles of Vision
This was an assignment in my college writing class. We had to write two descriptions of one scene from both a positive and negative angle of vision. Angle of vision ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Desert Hill
I didn't find anything i'd like to critique; I really enjoyed this story. It is indeed very tragic, and I'm sure a very realistic event for men fighting overseas. I ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Arizona Princess
Hello! I'll go ahead and review as i read, okay? The man looked at her crossly, ignoring the truth in her words. Sure, the bar was looking a bit shabby, ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Over Tea
I really, honestly enjoyed this piece, though I've never cared for this type of fiction before. :) Your description of the sisters delighted me, especially the sister-in-law. How subtle the ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset Chapter One
Hello again! Love the story so far! But I have a few more critiques :) Here we go! Waking up was never an easy thing to do for me, especially ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
This is such a sweet story! It had me "awww"-ing throughout the whole thing. :) But if you don't mind, I do have a few minor critiques: Lucas and I ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Left Hand Empty
Great job! It really makes me curious about this relationship: whether she is truly afraid of settling, or if there is more to it, especially since she pointedly rebels against ...
May 10, 2009
