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  • Research Re: How many pages should a chapter be?

    I've wondered about this in the past, and did a bit of research online, and observed approximate counts from books I've read. A typical chapter may be from 4,000-6,000 words, ...

    Mar 4, 2013
  • Writers Corner Re: Illustrated Fiction- Your opinions

    Thanks so much for your input guys! I hope people keep posting! I will be posting an illustration with my next chapter for one of my novels "The Girl with ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Writers Corner Re: Illustrated Fiction- Your opinions

    As both a visual artist and a writer, I always thoroughly enjoy reading an illustrated novel (and I don't mean graphic novels, although those are great too), and yet wonder ...

    Jan 8, 2013
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Let Thy Punishment Fit Thy Crime

    Author's note: This is just a quick something I wrote for my ENGL 105 final project. It's not necessarily high quality, because I wrote it in two and a half ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore

    Haha!!! This is absolute LOVE! I love the bold-face and enlarged font you used in the letter. "AND THEN". That really made me laugh. Great job, I really have nothing ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Speculative Fiction part II

    Very nice! The first post really caught my attention. I admit, I was pretty confused after reading it, but this part cleared it up for me. I really like how ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Warmed Over

    Wow. Amazing job!! You said this was inspired by a dream? A nightmare more likely! But absolutely brilliant. I really love how descriptive you got about Suzanne and her son, ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Wonder Bread

    Really great job! You provide such wonderful imagery in this piece, it feels like i'm there in the story. I think my favorite part of this work, was probably the ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Articles Re: The Sound of Music- Angles of Vision

    This was an assignment in my college writing class. We had to write two descriptions of one scene from both a positive and negative angle of vision. Angle of vision ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Desert Hill

    I didn't find anything i'd like to critique; I really enjoyed this story. It is indeed very tragic, and I'm sure a very realistic event for men fighting overseas. I ...

    May 14, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Arizona Princess

    Hello! I'll go ahead and review as i read, okay? The man looked at her crossly, ignoring the truth in her words. Sure, the bar was looking a bit shabby, ...

    May 14, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Over Tea

    I really, honestly enjoyed this piece, though I've never cared for this type of fiction before. :) Your description of the sisters delighted me, especially the sister-in-law. How subtle the ...

    May 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset Chapter One

    Hello again! Love the story so far! But I have a few more critiques :) Here we go! Waking up was never an easy thing to do for me, especially ...

    May 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.

    This is such a sweet story! It had me "awww"-ing throughout the whole thing. :) But if you don't mind, I do have a few minor critiques: Lucas and I ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Left Hand Empty

    Great job! It really makes me curious about this relationship: whether she is truly afraid of settling, or if there is more to it, especially since she pointedly rebels against ...

    May 10, 2009


That there's some good in this world, Mr Frodo - and it's worth fighting for.
— Samwise Gamgee