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  • Research Re: How many pages should a chapter be?

    I've wondered about this in the past, and did a bit of research online, and observed approximate counts from books I've read. A typical chapter may be from 4,000-6,000 words, ...

    Mar 4, 2013
  • Writers Corner Re: Illustrated Fiction- Your opinions

    Thanks so much for your input guys! I hope people keep posting! I will be posting an illustration with my next chapter for one of my novels "The Girl with ...

    Jan 9, 2013
  • Writers Corner Re: Illustrated Fiction- Your opinions

    As both a visual artist and a writer, I always thoroughly enjoy reading an illustrated novel (and I don't mean graphic novels, although those are great too), and yet wonder ...

    Jan 8, 2013
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Let Thy Punishment Fit Thy Crime

    Author's note: This is just a quick something I wrote for my ENGL 105 final project. It's not necessarily high quality, because I wrote it in two and a half ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore

    Haha!!! This is absolute LOVE! I love the bold-face and enlarged font you used in the letter. "AND THEN". That really made me laugh. Great job, I really have nothing ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Speculative Fiction part II

    Very nice! The first post really caught my attention. I admit, I was pretty confused after reading it, but this part cleared it up for me. I really like how ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Warmed Over

    Wow. Amazing job!! You said this was inspired by a dream? A nightmare more likely! But absolutely brilliant. I really love how descriptive you got about Suzanne and her son, ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Wonder Bread

    Really great job! You provide such wonderful imagery in this piece, it feels like i'm there in the story. I think my favorite part of this work, was probably the ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • General Articles Re: The Sound of Music- Angles of Vision

    This was an assignment in my college writing class. We had to write two descriptions of one scene from both a positive and negative angle of vision. Angle of vision ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Desert Hill

    I didn't find anything i'd like to critique; I really enjoyed this story. It is indeed very tragic, and I'm sure a very realistic event for men fighting overseas. I ...

    May 14, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Arizona Princess

    Hello! I'll go ahead and review as i read, okay? The man looked at her crossly, ignoring the truth in her words. Sure, the bar was looking a bit shabby, ...

    May 14, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Over Tea

    I really, honestly enjoyed this piece, though I've never cared for this type of fiction before. :) Your description of the sisters delighted me, especially the sister-in-law. How subtle the ...

    May 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset Chapter One

    Hello again! Love the story so far! But I have a few more critiques :) Here we go! Waking up was never an easy thing to do for me, especially ...

    May 11, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.

    This is such a sweet story! It had me "awww"-ing throughout the whole thing. :) But if you don't mind, I do have a few minor critiques: Lucas and I ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Left Hand Empty

    Great job! It really makes me curious about this relationship: whether she is truly afraid of settling, or if there is more to it, especially since she pointedly rebels against ...

    May 10, 2009


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