First Blush
3 Parts
Prologue: On a pleasant spring Thursday everything began to change.Ms.Carson’ third class was having recess, and everyone was enjoying themselves. The sky was a gorgeous baby blue, and the clouds ...
It was a pale green grassy patch with little critters and flowers moving around and blowing with the wind. The field was deserted with her being the only exception. She ...
The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and searching around for their food. The sun rose out from a cluster of pine trees, reflecting the tiny water droplets, ...
So this is my first time ever doing poetry in general, and I would love it if you guys gave me some critiques they would be very helpful. I'm trying ...
So I made this up yesterday while I was staring out my window. I know its unclear, but I would love reviews so I could clean it up a bit.From ...
Spoiler! : Part of the first chapter I've written please write helpful reviews. One:
The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and searching around for their food. The sun rose out from a cluster of pine trees, reflecting the tiny water droplets, ...
Spoiler! : Okay everyone I locked my last prologue and edited it but now I cannot unlock it so I just have to make a new topic...sorry A woman’s tiny ...
Spoiler! : I'm not very good at poetry, but I wrote this earlier to try and express how I was feeling. It is also really short. They've always liked her ...
Spoiler! : I'm bad at grammar so if anyone can correct me on that I would greatly appreciate. True Love is just like morning glories;so fulfilling, vivacious, and bright.The morning ...
Spoiler! : This is a new project I recently started. PrologueI heard my mother’s rich laughter fill our living room as I played with her black bouncy curls. We were ...