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Prologue: On a pleasant spring Thursday everything began to change.Ms.Carson’ third class was having recess, and everyone was enjoying themselves. The sky was a gorgeous baby blue, and the clouds ...Feb 13, 2010 -
It was a pale green grassy patch with little critters and flowers moving around and blowing with the wind. The field was deserted with her being the only exception. She ...Feb 20, 2010 -
The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and searching around for their food. The sun rose out from a cluster of pine trees, reflecting the tiny water droplets, ...Feb 21, 2010 -
So this is my first time ever doing poetry in general, and I would love it if you guys gave me some critiques they would be very helpful. I'm trying ...Mar 23, 2010 -
So I made this up yesterday while I was staring out my window. I know its unclear, but I would love reviews so I could clean it up a bit.From ...Mar 24, 2010 -
Spoiler! : Part of the first chapter I've written please write helpful reviews. One:Apr 17, 2010 -
The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and searching around for their food. The sun rose out from a cluster of pine trees, reflecting the tiny water droplets, ...May 1, 2010 -
Spoiler! : Okay everyone I locked my last prologue and edited it but now I cannot unlock it so I just have to make a new topic...sorry A woman’s tiny ...May 2, 2010 -
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Spoiler! : I'm not very good at poetry, but I wrote this earlier to try and express how I was feeling. It is also really short. They've always liked her ...Jul 15, 2011 -
Spoiler! : I'm bad at grammar so if anyone can correct me on that I would greatly appreciate. True Love is just like morning glories;so fulfilling, vivacious, and bright.The morning ...Jul 25, 2011 -
Spoiler! : This is a new project I recently started. PrologueI heard my mother’s rich laughter fill our living room as I played with her black bouncy curls. We were ...Aug 1, 2011 -
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