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Hi , I really enjoyed reading this short story and the imagery was amazing. However I thought the imagery distracted from the true meaning of the story and confused me ...

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This is a continuation of the first page of the book Nineteen Minutes which i wrote for my english creative writing coursework. Please let me know your opinion. :D In ...

I really liked the plot of your piece and thought the last few sentences were amazing.The description of the tramp was really good and I got a clear picture of ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this first chapter especially the introduction. The plot was interesting and made me want to read on but it would be even better if you described ...

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This was it. All my pain and suffering had led me here, like destiny. Instead of aiding me through the maze of life, it had dragged me intentionally down all ...