User avatar

narniej

  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: It Got To Him

    ...freckled face, his gorgeous gray-brown eyes, and... Such a lovely description up until this point. "Gorgeous" is a very normal term. I would try something less common, more meaningful. ...If ...

    Feb 14, 2012


akdsjfh you know that feeling where you start writing a scene but then you get bored with the scene so you move on and start writing a different scene and then you get bored with that scene so you move on to an entirely different WIP and then you get bored with that so you move on-
— AceassinOfTheMoon