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Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I haven't reviewed in a while, so I may be rusty. I shall try my best! I like that you started it off with a letter, which ...

This is for the Big Story Contest. My story is about a teacher at a desk attacking penguins. "Alright class, we shall resume after lunch and recess. You may go ...

Hi! I hope my suggestions help. This part was a little better than the first. It has a more action and explanation, but I don't think it's enough. If they ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I love the Hunger Games, so I hope my suggestions help! Overall, I thought it was fine. Not much is happening at the beginning, though. It has ...

Josh Hutcherson [Bridge to Terabithia, Journey to the Center of the Earth, etc.] is playing Peeta. And Liam Hemsworth [The Last Song] is playing Gale. That's all they have so ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! This was a very interesting piece. I liked the idea of the Mechanoids; they seem cool. I like your descritptions, especially of the pain. You didn't just ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First, great job! I really liked this. :) It was really fast paced that kept me reading and wanting to know what happened next. Also, the way ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! And I'd like a review if you have time. My novel is Igneous Rock [working on a better title] It has a prologue and two parts of ...

Hi! Narniafreak here to review! Well, I like that we get to see the "other side" so to speak, of the story. It lets the readers know that the real ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Wow. This kind of blew me away. I really felt the pain Amelia felt. And I kind of felt sad because of her predicament. It's a fantastic ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I hope my review can help. First, I did read the prologue and was very interested in this story. And this part helps set up what's about ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I hope this review helps! I was running as fast as I could. I wasn’t just going to let them kill me. I tried to stay quite, ...

If you have time... please review. However, this has a few reviews already so if you just want to read this and go on to the first part that's fine. ...

Hi! Okay here I go. I liked most of the dream. It could use some more detail and action. You give a little too much away about Greg though in ...

Hi! I'm back to do another review! I hope this helps! It was very interesting back story to the vultrinos. It let's readers know how the bad guys feel which ...