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Re: echoes through time
... a great story! Tight, with iron logic in the plot, like an early Heinlein almost. Or a Sheckley :D One thing only - spilling onto the pavement seems more ...
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Chronicles of the Abandoned, Part 4
I say, did Zeno have a younger brother, or perhaps was he himself like Raz, when younger? He seems to be quite smitten with the urchin. :lol: Also, I must ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: The last dark Day: The Saving of Zansia Chapters one and two
“Once there, you will have to find the heirs. There are three of them, all live in the same rural community in Wisconsin which is in the United States. Once ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Chronicles of the Abandoned, Part 3
We have yet to see what life "up there" is like, although we already know it has militiamen and whores, but life "down here" is full of inadequate retards armed ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Chronicles of the Abandoned, Part 1
Great snappy dialogue! I would say - worry not about cliches. In this day and age, you have to take yourself outside the human condition to reach really new grounds, ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: The Bubble Theory #1
Heh, heh, sounds like a brooding sort of intellectual enternal champion :D Just one thing, i was a bit taken aback, that the impersonal globe messenger said something like "Do ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: If You Could Hie to Kolob
Great atmosphere. I've reread many times Moorcock's Dancers at the End of Time, and the very concept is fascinating. A great moody begining. I wonder if by this point in ...
Sep 23, 2009
