mystymizer

Thank you very much for that!!! Best comment I have received yet, and thank you for pointing out the capitalization...something I always forget as I quickly type! Yes spoons is ...

So I'm wondering whose playing with spoons, Singing these songs and strumming out tunes; Filling our night with some sort of reprise. Who's deep within their own disguise? Just a ...

Okay...this poem as okay. I am not going to talk about structure or grammar, those have been covered already enough. I am going to talk about the actual words themselves. ...

This is amazing and it seems as though everybody else has already commenting on whatever it would be that I would say needs improvement (which is hardly anything). Lovely poem, ...

I enjoyed this poem actually...but the part of it that I think needs to be focused on is the structure itself. All of your lines needs to be evened out ...

I'm waiting for it to ripen, freeing my mind from all cares forgetting about my sin, giving up all these shares. It will bring suspense. I withdraw in solitude, grasping ...

This poem was great, good scheme and everything. Good thought development. The symmetry of wording (lines) was a little off at points - which I know is impossible to avoid ...

Beautifully written, especially the rhyming pattern. Also loved the idea behind it. I don't even have any CC to say (Sorry to disappoint!). I just simply enjoyed reading this! Great ...

I really, really, really enjoyed this one. Great job. I agree with what everybody said up there but I think this poem is generally good and I simply loved the ...

These words so foreign to my lips. When will my voice be able to say it? I hope it will soon come to me, just like the way it falls ...

Her heart turning into ice Her heart already eroded Denying her tears Denying her fears - Claire Leong - The repitition of words is not really working for this poem ...

I really like the italicized questions, they seem like they were meant to be the forefront of this piece and it's good because that is how they come off. It's ...

I like the idea of this poem also, as recently said. I do not, however, really enjoy the format in which is written because it comes off very bland, plain, ...

I greet the busy lines of tired eyes Red fingers crisp from the tricked weather Icy fences with cardinals losing themselves The streets still full of dirtied snow Tire tracks ...

ties from burgundy carpet rugs my back is burnt just as bad as bad as the burns you left beside my lungs large flakes feel like chalant dates times that ...