mystymizer

I am absolutely enthralled by this piece. A perfect piece and example of narrative poetry, the rhyming scheme was done brilliantly! To add some style and change it up from ...

In this world of darkness, In this world of pain There is one who is always here for us; It is hatred. Simple punctuation like this allows the reader to ...

Never say "not my best work" or "not good", it makes people not interested in reading it! Have confidence in yourself and others will appreciate it more! ^^ A few ...

Heya! I've been on here awhile now and have realized that I have YET to introduce myself. I do believe this is popostrous! ^^ Anyway, My name is Mysty and ...

First off, I loved the poem...now lets take a little in depth look at it here and see what I can do (it won't be much, but it's something!). Winter ...

Black fire paralyzed their eyes. Their presence disturbed none- a simple change in the wind. He cringed into a small corner, face splattered with dark mud. These chills questioned no ...

This poem is pretty to the point and although it uses imagery it feels like it is forced, bland imagery. This is not always a negative thing, some poems work ...

I really like this poem, short, simple and the quick imagery was great. Good work. The only thing I have to say is that maybe you should think about revising ...

Never critsize your own work by saying it's "not good". How many people are going to want to comment on it when even the author thinks it's trash? Write because ...

Er...I liked the concept within itself (as in the story being told). I am just curious as to why you believed formatting and schemes were unnecessary? Punctuation and other grammar ...

This poem has great imagery and I did really enjoy its content. My advise, however, would be to add some structure to this thing! ^^ Capitalization is almost a must, ...

And there it was found. A once strangled hope cried out, I now know I cannot live without; For from your eyes spirits sprout, What else is there to write ...

Hm...I will not be commenting on the subject matter even though I will say I did enjoy reading this. However, I understand what you mean by the fact you are ...

I certainly enjoyed this! I would, however, advise you to change up the punctuation now and again and get ride of having the "period at the end of every line" ...

Now, I am not a fan of Edward Cullen but lets leave that out of the picture. Speaking of the poem itself, it should have been re-done so that it ...