mystymizer

This is the first chapter to the short biography of my life that I am writing to basically keep track of things. It's called "Get It" and the first chapter ...

Oh thank you! And it's funny you should use the word "frolic" because in the first picture of flowers I seriously frolicked after wards. ^^

These are just a few snapshots and photographs of random things! Flowers The view at my boyfriend's cottage STOP A bench in my hometown of Alliston Railroad Tracks Pages to ...

I'm not even sure if I'm allowed to comment on this [in fear of wrath!], ha. Lets just say you got your point across, you're through with reading depressing poems. ...

This poem is meant to be short but you can comment on the length if you really want to! Short clasps around my damaged heart; To bleed, to lead me ...

I touch his soft red rosy lips, Good alliteration, catches my attention! Trace the pattern with my finger tips, He grins at me and stokes my cheek, All handsome kind ...

I liked the idea behind this poem but the structure was a little too off when you didn't mean it so (it does seem). For one I think for this ...

This is an odd poem with strange structure. I wrote it how I felt inspired to write it. We keep falling backwards on all our regrets, Stepping around rotten petals ...

This poem was pretty all right, if you know what I mean. The problem I had with it was the structure which was very off when it came to syllable's. ...

Hmm...the concept and thought behind the poem was good. Dark, slightly morbid, I enjoyed it. My nit-picks are; -Punctuation should be added -A little more meter/syllable (I can't find the ...

Hey there! Everything has been said to you already! I really hope you enjoy your stay at YWS, everybody usually does! Have fun and good luck with your writing! ^^

Name: Mysty Age: 17 going on 18 Blood Type: AO-Negative ( Everybody needs to know this! :wink: ) Height: Too short, haha Interests: Reading, writing, dancing at random, hanging out, ...

Seems like all your questions have been answered! Just saying hello instead and I hope you have a great time on YWS! You find a lot of great people on ...

Well, How2EataRhesus was it? That was probably the Clowning Portion of the camp! Whacky! There are people from ALL over the world there, my best friend is from HONG KONG ...

This is for beckiw's "Story From a Photo" Contest where you have to create a story inspired by a photograph. I hope you enjoy and please critique...If you review me, ...