mystymizer

I am more than pleased and THANK YOU to all of my reviewers, all of these were my best reviews yet! Thank you times a ba-jillion, thousand! This poem meant ...

I very much appreciate the review Peanut, but as said this is a 'stream of consciousness' poem ... ever read Ulysses? It's like that. No grammar or punctuation needed, the ...

* Meant to be almost like a stream of consciousness ballad. * Sauntered up to that tree earlier today, the one that invokes wonder in my soul my perfect solid-self ...

Why do we do what we do, the way we do it? This universal feather becomes almost dead to us. Cris-cross our lines entirely, but keep far back. Shake up ...

Standing against these waves, My feet flogged with mud. Shoulders hunched by problems, a weight I cannot handle. I can taste the salt seeping into my wounds. A buoy holds ...

For those lost souls, Death is hardest on the forgotten . I would use a period here instead of a comma For those lost souls, Time of pain, and floods ...

I really thoroughly enjoyed this poem especially the small descriptions like "violet fire". It was perfect and the punctuation worked very well as did the structure for the words themselves. ...

A lot of siblings is definitely not as cool as it sounds...but it is as hectic! My fave book is Ayn Rand's "Anthem" or Anne Rice's "The Vampire Chronicles" (Any ...

I really liked this poem! Great rhyming and everything, all-in-all I have to say great job! One thing though, punctuation? I think this poem could do even ten times better ...

This sonnet was written about the first girl I ever fell in love with (and still am in love with). She was generally referred to as Alice, her favorite Disney ...

Not too fond of this piece ( but I hate saying I don't like pieces on here )! You should definitely think about more punctuation and adding a little rhythm ...

Just saying hello and welcome! Hope you have fun here at YWS, if you ever need help or just want an extra review lemme know! Mysty.

Welcome to YWS, hope you enjoy your stay here! If you ever need an extra review, lemme know! Have fun! Mysty.

Just saying welcome as the above people seem to have covered everything else! If you ever need an extra review just lemme know! Have fun and get writing! :D Mysty.

Yeah really. I thought MY poems were short (I'm not making fun of you I promise) :) I do have something else to say though about this; Short clasps around ...