mystiquevander

The rainfall makes your inhibitions rumble So go on, feed them the freedom they want and cease the grumble I remember that night I lied in the grass, freezing wind ...

I know this was posted awhile ago but I really wanted to read some of your works and I found this one the most intriguing. Very good scheme and pattern, ...

Hey there. First let me say this was a good piece but could definitely go further if you give it some TLC. I believe that some punctuation would definitely do ...

I aboslutely loved this poem! Very well done! It was unorthodox in everyway, but somehow it always made sense. I applaud your writing style and technique, the punctuation was astute ...

I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed this!!! WOOHOO WARHAMMER 40K!! ^_^ And on top of that...I froth at the mouth when presented with such a piece with Chaos so ...

Hey there and Hi there, this is Mysty. I really like this poem and the intents you've portrayed through it - very well written in my opinion. =) I don't ...

I concur with retrodisco666, please add punctuation to this poem for it could make it a thousand times better than it already is. I did enjoy it for I could ...