mysterywriter

To you.... cool. then i would be happy to give you my opinion and any suggestions i may have. i really am enjoying what i've read so far. great plot. ...

thanks to everyone who said hello! what a friendly bunch! i finally posted my prologue in the fantasy section. it's not titled yet so it's titled (ironically) untitled. any feed ...

j hippy - i think that this was really really good. very descriptive and poetic. i hope that you consider doing more with it because i think it has the ...

Hey I should be posting my next chapter soon...will ya crit it for me? were you addressing that to me or mattie? if you were addressing it to me then ...

bravo! 8) what a perfect image of what it's like to get your heart broken.

This a really good prologue in my opinion. It describes the plot very well. I just have to learn how to pronounce the names. Anyway, well done! ~Lollipop~ :D thanks! ...

It takes place in the 18th Century oops my bad. after i posted that and thought about it i realized since the character was to have an "arranged marriage" that ...

( please feel free to correct any gramatical errors. :lol: ) *here is a little guide since my map isn't done yet: nerms = city people sefier = morpher mushuk ...

thanks for all of the welcomes. 8) Dargquon Ql'deleodna - im not sure what the title will be yet, but i will probably post the prologue on the board soon. ...

definitely makes me keep want to reading it. i would try to avoid using the 'well' thing. for instance: well, me. or well, my parents. also i can't tell when ...

"In life, lies are punished. On paper, they are rewarded. Yet, maybe on paper I am more myself then even in life. Perhaps writing brings out the truth more then ...

thanks for the gift - oh now that pink elephant is just delightful! :lol: :elephant: i like that: "writer's depression" :thumb: i've actually started writting a fantasy novel, the prolouge ...

wow. this is so romantically morbid. i liked it and i wouldn't want to change anything about it...you did a really good job with the description of everything and i ...

im new and i think i might be the oldest person on this board. :lol: but it's cool. i've been writing since i can remember, the unfortunate thing about it ...

i enjoyed it. i would give you grammar tips but i myself am not that great when it comes to grammar. :lol: one suggestion i will give you is: put ...