myrisha

My name is Terry Henkins, also known as Ace on the streets. I'm 6 ft exactly. I have brown hair, blue eyes and the abs of a God. So, I ...

Thank you everyone. I will pluck and tweak it to finish the story. I think it was a pretty good as I wrote this idea straight out of my head.

Pawn- a person used by another to gain an end. My name is Terry Henkins also known as Ace on the streets. I'm 6 ft exactly. I have brown hair,blue ...

This is a awkward but good poem. Love is like that sometimes. It's complicated and full of emotions. One minute they are in love and the next they aren't. I ...

I don't get every single line that I read in this but the message is overall clear. You have good beat and style that works great. I like the last ...

WOW! That was a very rough, realistic and interesting piece of writing. I give you credit for writing about something is so taboo. I think that it's great portrayal of ...

This was a different interesting view point. I didn't expect the story to read the way it did. Of course there were some grammar problems but it didn't take attention ...

I am writing this because I wrote a story filled with dialogue just like yours. I didn't see the problem until everyone told me it was too much. You need ...

The swirl 2.0 (voted by unpopular demand) Welcome back to The Swirl! Previously on The Swirl we found out that Myrisha wrote a story that only had skeletons and clearly ...

At first I wasn't sure where you were going with the writing but then I understood the story unfolding. This has so much truth and brings a revelation of human ...

I'm not the biggest harry potter fan but I like your poem. It really does make me feel a sense of belonging to the world she created with the books ...

"Can I have a single cone please" Katie waited in line to get some ice cream. "What flavor?" The employee asked. "Vanilla and chocolate swirl thank you" "So...you like swirl ...

That's pretty clever with your story. keep up the good work. You made us think one thing when you really were talking about something else. That's a good way to ...