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  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    Thank you so much! A really heartfelt review. :)

    Jul 13, 2023
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    Thank you so much! Yes, I really messed up with the paragraphs haha.

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    Thank you! I was writing about family. I agree with the paragraphs.

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    Thank you! English isn't my first language and in my mother tongue, we use commas a lot, so it wasn't an intentional comma, just a mistake, but thanks for the ...

    Jul 10, 2023
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Three days

    Thank you for the review! I agree, I should have split it into paragraphs. While writing this I was letting out everything I was feeling, like putting pen to paper ...

    Jul 10, 2023


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