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Re: Untitled no 1
When salience is from silence ensued then is silence of the salience from? Or of silence itself salience Ensued. when past treats life well, life treats the past when to ...
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Re: Tact
Tact Masking an obvious truth, at least for those with thought. A statement meant to prove a point, or just a moment’s taunt. Sarcasm. Shaking certainties erratic, or simply feeding ...
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Re: Into the Citrus Trees
If your intention with this poem is to make us "feel", well then you are successful because each line is charged with just enough emotion (with images to boot!) for ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: The Man of Many Words
Being a fan of more modern and post-modern forms of poetry, I'm generally not really particular about sticking to the meter of the poem. Despite this, however, I still believe ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: My un-known
ok. This is a start. It is good that you actually had an idea of what you wanted to write. Now what you have to do is to learn how ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: A Pound Of Flesh
This is a very interesting concept for the poem. I'd just like to point out that at times, the similarities between the intimate relationship, and the business relationship that you ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Centrifuge (the poetry contest-edited)
This is rather interesting. I like the universe you created and the scene that you were depicting. It is very dark, and intense yet more real than a tim burton ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: I don't know :P (and springrain chose the title, so ha!)
Wow. This is a really interesting poem. It is short and simple, and incredibly entertaining. You've certainly nailed how to stimulate a intellectual humor. I am amazed by the depth ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Simple Storm
I really like short poems. I'd have to say that length is definitely this particular poem's strength. Through its length, the buildup and the epiphany emulates the descriptions you used ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Dead Lines
self sought silence, suffered scattered tender tried travel, tired trails tremble ran red river road, ruined Regalia delved deeper, done damage, die did.
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
This is among the better poems that I've read so far. I'd like to start out by first saying that I disagree with the previous posters. I don't think you ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Into the Citrus Trees
Although simple and direct is good, the risk of running a poem that says exactly what it means is that it doesn't feel engaging enough when it is read. I ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey guys. I just dropped by to introduce myself, I'm still new around here and I still find the general interface (especially for the the profile toggling) a tad bit ...
May 18, 2009
