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I like the story, although I find it really deep and even a little depressing. But I like how you explained rain, and thought about rainbows. Although I found a ...

That was very good, I think you will get a good note in mythology class (I never knew there were mythology classes, but cool!) There are just a few mistakes ...

Nice story! That would be a harsh dream to have! I really liked it and I think it was very good, although I would like to point out a few ...

That was great! I think this one was better than last chapter, even though there isn't a lot of action like the prologue. I still don't understand how it is ...

I liked this chapter, but I think that it was a bit too slow after reading the prologue. The prologue is full of action and this is something completely different. ...

Awesome! I'm really looking forward to reading the first chapter, although I did find it a bit confusing as I read it. I think you should tell us how had ...

Wow! That was a really good story! It caught me when I started reading it just until the end. There is just a mistake I'd like to point out: He ...

Good job! I think it was an amazing story, although there are some mistakes that I would like to point out: Trees flew by you, You began the story in ...

I think it was a good story. Although I think that you made the story a bit too fast. You should also have explained and described more of the wars ...

Great... The story really catched me, I think it was wonderful. Although I agree that you should make more paragraphs, just for a place to rest the eye. The one ...

It is awesome. I liked the first paragraph, then it didn't really catch me the next few paragraphs, and then it hooked me again. Although I think you made a ...