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well Hi!!! everyone is nice here so you'll get used to the language pretty quick. But what do I know, I'm an American (0.0)

hey and welcome!!!! I hope you have your creative cap on because your in for a hodge-podge of stuff!!! I'm Kirby, nice to meet 'cha.

I think it's alright. I would just add color!! :)

Wow!!! Extreme!! The only thing is you might want to add a few stage directions in. But besides that, Awesome!!

Wow, Really good!!! I like the imagery, word choice, and the story!! Good job.

I only have one complaint, I feel it's to flat. I wish you would use a bit more Imagery. But overall, it's really good!!!

Again thanks to all!!! you guys are so nice, unlike the last writers site I was on.

Oh wow thanks everyone!!!! I hope I don't let you all down!!

I'm not sure if you are still doing this, but if so, Can you review my short story? Thank you very much!!

she returned to normal and....

Banned because no action is stupid.

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of course!!!

I really liked this poem. However, I agree with the other about the last line. I think if you change the word choice, it'll be smoother. But overall, I liked ...

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