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Re: 9/11 Remember
Remember, remember, but do not forget.
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Ground Zero
Well it all depends if you want it to be a story that is about her becoming a total bad ass that protects herself to the end, or a comedic ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: God drives a 68 Cutlass Supreme
It was as if time had elapsed and the only thing the world was running on gasoline; and the only time left was in my tank; and I was burning ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Love, in an elevator.
Thanks for the critiques! I have terrible spelling and grammar, a hereditary trait, agitated by the Texas education system... Bear with the story! It's a spin off of a larger ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: Love, in an elevator.
It was beautiful. Every inch of it, every line, every curve, button, screw, door, hatch, and latch; I loved it. I wanted to stay on it - forever, to be ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Honey Amber Shoal
I honestly didn't enjoy this piece much, but it's only because it's not my favorite style of writing, not because it's a horrible piece! Overall, it was solid at the ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Hand
I'm not sure if you're trying to make it rhyme but if you are, you defiantly need to change up the above lines, but I think that if you like ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: A Pound Of Flesh
Have you happen to have read the 'Merchant of Venice' recently? Or at least I believe that's the one...?
May 15, 2009
