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  • Writing Tips Re: Question about submitting a work

    It won't let me use indentations, which makes my writing very hard to read because the lines are all close together and new paragraphs have no indentations. How do I ...

    Nov 3, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: The Will of the Knight - Chapter 1

    1310 A.D. Feast and Frost Perched atop the old mound in the Warwick Castle courtyard, shivering in the cold February air, sat two young girls of twelve, each one covered ...

    Jul 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Forbidden Violets

    Wow, your writing is exceptional! I can't believe you're fourteen! (I'm eighteen and I can't begin to write as fluidly as you do!) Anyway, the only picky thing that isn't ...

    Jul 3, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: What is love?

    Poetry or lyrics are the two things I cannot be critical about. Poetry has a technical side, yes, but I'm not interested in that. I love the way your poem ...

    Jul 2, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Catching God

    Great work! I must say that the beginning of your story is just the kind of start to get a person like me hooked. I love first-person prose, where the ...

    Jul 2, 2008
  • Official Polls Re: Defense or Defence?

    I've always written it as defense. But I just looked it up in my Oxford English dictionary and they use "defence" and "defensive." So I dunno. Either way, I guess.

    Jul 2, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm new.

    I'm Marika, I live in Tennessee, and I've been writing since I was five or so... I just discovered this site, and it got me excited. I've been looking for ...

    Jul 2, 2008


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