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Okay, so off the top of my head I came up with this list: 5-1984- I realize that this is a classic, and okay, so Orwell is a good writer, ...

Okay, I like Evelina best out of your list. But I also like Evangeline, Laena, Evelyne, Lily, Aleana, and Carlianne.

First- Okay, so the idea is cool, but it seems either too Sky High, or too indirectly related to Twilight too me. But I think if you developed it a ...

I'm writing a novel that I've been working on for a few years now. I don't really remember what started the idea, but I remember that I had it in ...

Alex Rider series by Anthony Horowitz. At least they're exciting. 8) I LOVED those books! Just wanted to say that. I'm currently reading North of Beautiful, by Justina Chen Headly, ...

I actually started writing when I was about eight or nine. My mother is a writer, and she always asked me to read her Harry Potter fan-fiction, because she knew ...

Okay, so I really like this one. I'm a sucker for metaphors, and this poem was full of a lot of great ones. I also love the repetition of the ...

I really liked this piece. It was one of those poems that's short, but very sweet. I thought you caught the emotion very well, because I know exactly how it ...

This is an exercise we did in the Writer's Guild at my high school. The teacher gave each person a random first line from a poem, and we had to ...

This piece really touched me. I love how it emphasizes that love is not about looks or how smooth your skin is. It show that love is pure if you ...

Thanks for the critiques, I will definitely work on this! I appreciate the suggestions!

You gave me a dozen red roses And I gave you my heart For a dozen black ones Would you give it back to me? You changed before my eyes ...

This poem really stood out to me. I loved how you said 'golden thread' instead of just thread. It really added to the mood of this piece. The poem was ...