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  • Lyrics Re: The Talking of Swans

    That was... deep. I think it was way better than your other one (no offense or anything). Haha. I was considering about writing some lyrics for BBB's contest too, but ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Garage Sale of Memories

    That was a really good message you sent out there; that memories are priceless. Garage sale of memories Get 'em while they're cheap. The sign was old and faded, like ...

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Happy New Year 2009

    My New Year's resolution is to be happy :D. Sounds cliche, I know.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: That kid

    I really liked this. I once knew a kid in my class who was just like this. He would wear these ragged clothes and everyone would make fun of him ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Damage of Reality

    I love the title. I thought the poetry was swell, especially the last part. I did have a few problems though... Your mother, your father, Your sister, your brother, your ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Jimmy

    Wow. That was really good. It had a great start, a fantastic ending, and was filled with rich descriptive details. I loved it.

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Crying On Paper

    Hello evanrith. My opinion on your poem is that it has a great idea behind it but the words are a bit boring. I absolutely loved the title though. It ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Emotions and Lights

    I loved the first photo. I didn't think the next two photos were as good as the first one because it seemed a bit fake. Like it was set-up and ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Time

    Hello there. This was quite an insightful piece but I think it would've been more meaningful if it rhymed. Anyways.... It makes the memories fade the memories fade Heal the ...

    Dec 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: [deleted]

    That was... soothing in an insane way. I am Helen. I am Helen. My name is Helen. Although yesterday it was Hannah, and tomorrow it will be Ruth, for now ...

    Dec 29, 2008


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