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I loved it. It really describes the life of a writer. In contrast to what April *peanutgallery007* said, I actually loved the last part. and I don’t write for you ...

I thought the title was misleading. It was a great title, by the way, so congrats on that. But when I clicked on it, I expected something more...... melancholic. Oh ...

That was veryy good. I thought some lines would be better changed though, like There’s a little picture pinned up beside my bed, And it tells a story, a story ...

i LOVED it. Gosh, that was so good. I wish I could write like that. Bravo! Great poem.

I do not intend to be rude, but here is my opinion. As a passionate chess player, this is an insulting view of the game. Pawns are NOT worthless and ...

That was enjoyable in a dark way. It's deep and that's what I like about it.

Thanks Nathan. I guess I follow the writing rules too much.

That was a metaphorically nice poem even though I don't really get the thing about where water and glass meet. This was original, which is why I like it so ...

Thanks imapoemperson. And lilchoma, thanks for giving me some examples. I guess that's just proof of what a bad Christian I used to be. I say that because, even though ...

Thanks for your opinion, thedreamwalker and lilchoma. I must say, though, that I agree with thedreamwalker. I get what you're saying, lilchoma about the abortion and all that, but I ...

Thanks for your opinion, lilchoma, velvetwhispers, and lukas8u. Lilchoma-I've never thought about pedophiles or serial killers that way. I don't think serial killers are born with an inclination to ki

Thanks so much musiclover and chipsnadguacamollie. I really appreciate your comments and reviews.

Hello everybody. This is for Gadi's Gay Contest. I usually don't enter contests or post anything on YWS because of my profound laziness, but this particular contest compelled me to ...

That was good. It was oddly original and very interesting. Here's a suggestion though.... You don’t need an irresponsible girl who fails in almost all everything. You don’t need a ...

Wow. You're an incredibly powerful poet. I wish I was this good. It's awfully nice that you're writing about something the world needs to consider instead of some cliche hackneyed ...