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Hey, Pickle! ^.^ It's superb that you've attempted to write poetry. It's an art form much appreciated and tells so much about the poet's thoughts and the notions that he/she ...

Hey there, Kira! :D Like Snoinky above me, I too hope that this isn't a true story. A good and optimistic ending is what I always love reading in poems. ...

Sherly and Dasia! :D So you've both collaborated on a Novel and it looks pretty great! This has got a solid story and does bring out the mood of being ...

Hey Abid! This poem doesn't really seem like a poem on first impressions since it has such a prose-y type of delivery and structure. The story has been laid out ...

Hey, Ravi! This is an entertaining piece here that you've written and the story is charming. Git, in the name of peace, vows to prevent the collision of forces and ...

Hey, Coco! This is an endearing story with a great bitter-sweet ending that is positive and has great moral to boot. I see a lot of stray animals outside. Cats, ...

Hey, Creativity! ^.^ I love this poem to bits. It's a great concept and the aspect in which you've portrayed the knife, the evidence, is so well imagined and described. ...

Hey, Sassy! I apologize, but I've not read 'The Raven'. Though I have no doubt that it's a great poem because it's inspired you to write so well even though ...

Hey aj! ^.^ It's been a long time since I've read your stuff and right now, I'm really amazed at this piece. There's wonderful imagery here and great scenario that ...

Hey Emmz! This is a sort of bittersweet poem about running away with the one you love and having a peaceful life in a quiet place where there's only the ...

Hermydear! ^.^ This is so nice. It's charming and playful and so much fun to read. It all looks and feels so perfect because it's written by an actual mischievous, ...

Hey, Coco! ^.^ This is a brilliant concept and definitely so very poetic. It speaks clearly and doesn't ask for too much to be understood. You've done well to add ...

Hey, Insanity! This is an amusing and somewhat humorous outlook of a daughter who casually, yet firmly explains to her mother what she does and doesn't want in her life. ...

Hey there, Chibi! Snow is such a wonderful thing to write about. And it's great that you've provided for a scenery that is so simple and calm which really brings ...

Hey, Sarah! ^.^ Amazingly well written. This a prime example of a poem best written when it is inspired from a format that is so expressive and engages one's mind. ...