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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 2

    Hey, Ahmad! This particular chapter had me intrigued. Very much so. Mustafa Ehab, to me, sounds like quite a self-centred, selfish man in power who doesn't make the right decisions ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: Creekside Thoughts: A Collection of Poetry

    Hi Heidi! ^.^ It's a delight to always read a poem with a flow that's clear and well, flows easily. The concept of this poem is brilliant, I find. People ...

    May 25, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Removed

    Hi, Beckeh!

    May 17, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spider

    Deanster! I love this poem because it's got that really lovely childish aura about it. I could well find this in a collection of fine nursery rhymes. It's simple and ...

    Mar 20, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No Man's Girl

    Hey, Misty! The story about a fallen comrade, a brother in arms and of the bond shared between two close friends that you've woven for us here is touching, sad ...

    Feb 20, 2012
  • Lyrics » Politics, Realistic Re: Tongue In Cheek (ONLY 18 AND OVERS MAY VIEW. CONTAINS RACIST SLANG BUT ONLY FOR EFFECT.)

    Hey Adam! Okay, this lyrical piece has a lot going for itself. The hate, disgust and torment all very blunt and unabashedly portrayed (which I'm sure you've done intentionally ;)). ...

    Feb 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Regeneration

    Hello, Shemlock! Firstly, welcome to YWS! I'm glad you've joined this writing community and that you have a lot of fun here. Feel free to ask me for any help ...

    Feb 15, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Book Review: Fahrenheit 451

    Justa! This book definitely sounds like one I'd be interested in reading. There are actually quite a number of books I've lined up to read and I'm going to include ...

    Feb 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Obsession Vs. Affection

    Hey Adam! I'll make this short! Okay so firstly, the narration and perspective is good. Sinister and evil as the whole tone is, it gives me an idea about how ...

    Feb 10, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Movie you have seen...

    When I think of favourite movies, there's always a bunch that come to mind. :D Christoper Nolan's Batman movies, Memento and Inception are great. There's so much of talent that ...

    Jan 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Listen To My Thoughts, Even When Speaking

    Hey, Abid! I'm so sorry I kept you waiting on my review. But I'm glad that you showed your piece to me. Creativity and Blue have given some very insightful ...

    Jan 14, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Nobel Endeavour

    Hey, Charlie! First Impressions You've delivered to us a brilliant and somewhat amusing tale about an enterprising mind. I'm quite fond of such landmark situations in history which anecdote the ...

    Jan 12, 2012
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Connections

    Misty! ^.^ I'm so sorry for the late reviewing. When I read this story, I was quite happy and satisfied that you brought such flair into it. Obviously, I've missed ...

    Jan 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Passionate Murderer

    Hey Anwesha! A very good poem, indeed. The seemingly sadistic nature of the murderer as he taunts his prey and the smitten victim who doesn't realize she's been played have ...

    Jan 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Endless Game (revised)

    Hey, Aubrie! ^.^ This is a great story and you've managed to capture the innocence of a little child so well. I'm hoping this isn't a true story. If so, ...

    Jan 10, 2012


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind