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Re: Course and Destination
Here's the story, of two young folks one named Scott, and the other, Rose. They seemed for each other, perfect and may live happily, if ever they met. The Fates ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Days Teach Me
This is such a lovely poem. A lot of positivity and inspiration has been blended here with a good flow of words and meaning. I like poems like this. The ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Fruitless Tree
This poem really reflects the on the mind and makes one ponder over the purpose of life. I like how you found the inspiration for writing this when you were ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Lingering Guilt
Wow, this is really powerful. "I know you still wash the blood of your hands, little boy It seems to be stuck under your nails. I know you can see ...
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Cheesecake Icon
Cute, I've always wanted to know how to make one of these animated pics. You've made it well! Great job :)
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: At Sea
Being my very first, It does have a lot of faults, though I still like to look upon it from time to time and realize how I first started with ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Fortress of Isengard
Well, I can't help but notice that the lines in the original chapter you've quoted and the lines in the poem are very much a alike, if not the same. ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Journey
I was pondering along The ever-open road, Singing a cheery song I didn’t want to be bored. I had my lucky coin, I plucked my four-leaf clover I sipped a ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Shadows
This poem has a really strong and true message to it and does give a brief account of life's unforgiving nature. The past is something we can never undo or ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Spark in my heart
Heheh, this is such a fun piece! Considering that it was done spontaneously and in no time at all, I'd have to say that this is quite an impressive write. ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Boys like girls like boys things
I can definitely see this coming from a hip-hop/rapping artiste and you've done a fantastic job with the rhythm and the choruses which are the actual dialogue from the show ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: The Dreamer
They can look, They can stare; say all they want I won’t care “You’re foolish and you’re wrong!” Whatever their words It’s the same old song. I won’t give reason; ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Song of the Siren
I start reading the first paragraph and think that this is a 'Solitary Reaper' type poem but then the 3rd stanza just took me by surprise! Beauty can be deadly ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: A Story
This is an excellent poem with a great premise and description. The first stanza was very well written and it showed really good language and skill. I greatly enjoyed reading ...
Oct 19, 2011 -
Re: Le Morte d’Arthur
This poem is definitely epic. Good use of language and a fantastically woven tale. I was gripped to it from the beginning to end the and the description of the ...
Oct 19, 2011
